“When did it arrive?” I said as my new puppy liked my face.
“A couple of days ago.” Mum said.
“Is it a girl or a boy?” I asked.
“A girl.” mum said.
“You can name it whatever you want.” added Dad.
“I think i’ll name her Spike because the fur on her head is spiked up.”
“I think that’s a great idea.” said my brother Max. He didn’t get a puppy because he wanted a mouse. But mum said he wasn’t old enough. Spike was so tired from her long trip that she curled up on my lap and fall asleep.
By Issy M
hi Issy
ReplyDeleteI really like your story it has a lot of detail on the fur.
next time i think you could work on making your scentinser a bit bigger