Thursday, May 17, 2018

Hayley 100WC #31.

The Fireette´s.

Have you ever heard the  song of a Fireette? If you have you’ll know what I mean. It sounds like a Dragon and an Owl all in one. It’s beautiful and scary. They were discovered in the desert of fire, found half dead buried under the sand. The discoverers took it to the closest Owl sanctuary that was 2 hours away. When they got to it, two Fireette’s had mated and there were 2 babies. They were named Fireball and Lavaia. Later in the Fireette world they were named the King and Queen. And that's where they are for now…….
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  1. AnonymousAugust 12, 2018 at 4:07 PM

    i really liked the way you added in make believe characters

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