Thursday, May 10, 2018

100WC week#30 By Mason

“OMG Laine, when did it arrive?” I said.  A Bugatti!  Then we went for a drive.  The car color was bright yellow.  We did some drits with it then I gotta drive so we went to MD’s.  Laine got a drink and some fries.  I took off so fast that his drink was all over the floor and the fries went between the seats.  Then laine drove it again.  Then we were driving up his driveway and it blew up so Laine tries to get a refund.  “No refund” said the lady who owns the Bugatti

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 14, 2018 at 3:00 PM

    I really like the way you described the color of the car and how you said how fast it went

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  2. AnonymousMay 14, 2018 at 3:04 PM

    very funny mason I liked the way you said the bugatti blew up and I tried to get a refund

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