Thursday, May 24, 2018

100WC Week#32 by Abbie

The Lego Set                                                                                           
It was Sunday afternoon and I was really excited for Monday the 21 of May as I was getting this awesome lego set with 1000 pieces.      As Monday  afternoon came I ran down the driveway  to look in the mailbox and slowly walked back up.   When I got in my room I ripped the box open and grabbed the instructions, opened them,  but I didn't  understand the instructions they were written in  Chinese how will I ever build the coolest lego set ever. It was the sky tower in Auckland.
By Abbie

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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousMay 29, 2018 at 5:13 PM

    Hi Abbie

    I love it how you described it when you opened the box and sadly the instructions saw in chinese
    but well done
    Rita

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