Thursday, May 24, 2018

Aidans 100WC Week #32

Always listening I think Blah Blah Blah I'm stuck in boring old science class with Mrs Hallford. I properly should be listen, bah I don't care. She splits us up into groups. I have Calar, Jake and Sarah. Everyone looks scared Calar gives me a pen, and everyone starts saying ideas. I decided to write them down. The teacher comes around to our group, “Why do you not look so scared”. “Why”.” i’m sure you know. I ask Jack. He says we have been chosen to protect the world from a boom that's going to explode and destroy the work in 3 days.
By Aidan



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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousMay 24, 2018 at 7:16 PM

    Good job aidan i liked the way you started this post to 100wc
    starting with Blah Blah Blah made a fantastic start to your story next time try to include the prompt

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