“ Mum has my present arrived?”
“No” “Aunt told me It will be here today, it is only 9:00am so it could be hear from whatever time from now”
“Ok can I ring Ava and see if she wants to come over?”
“Yes.” So she rang.
”Mum, Mum she can come over, Renee said she will drop her off in 5 minutes”
“Ok, what are you going to do?” Mum asked.
“Go downtown” I said.
“Ok take your phone with you”
“Okay” I said.
In no time the day was over. “Your present arrived” said Mum.
“When did it arrive?” I said…
By Morgan
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ReplyDeleteI like the withing but what was the gift for your mum.
ReplyDeletei really liked the story but next time try to be more desciptive about the story
ReplyDeleteI really want to know more like what was in the present
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