Shape Shifter
Once in a shadow realm, an Otak was trying to hunt and use his skills to kill a Caribou. He threw his spear, missed, then ran to get it but it was gone. So he turned into a Griffin and went to find it. When he got back he turned back and said to his friend "why would I do that to my powers?¨
"Because you have been talking about it for ages.¨
¨Ya but it doesn't mean I'm going to do it?¨ So should that be the end. you choose.
"Because you have been talking about it for ages.¨
¨Ya but it doesn't mean I'm going to do it?¨ So should that be the end. you choose.
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