¨Wow! Did you see that he just swallowed that flame¨.
¨Yeah i wonder how he did that.¨
¨He had some special
ice in his mouth I think.¨
A mother and her daughter went to an amusement park that
they regularly went to, they saw a poster that said there was a circus special
on later in the night and it said they were going to have a tiger and and
elephant.
¨Can we go Mother please and can we also get some lime
juice?¨
¨Its past your bedtime.¨
¨I´ll do chores after, and fix the clock at home.¨
¨Okay¨
Yay.¨
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