Wednesday, August 8, 2018

Special Prompt #3 Issy M

“It is a regularly da…” BOOM! BANG! THUMP!
“What was that.”I ask my little brother, in a very stern voice.
“Oh you heard that.”said my little brother.
“Why yes I did.”I said.
“Now what was that”I asked again.
“It was Poppa's new clock.  I was practicing kicking the ball and well it went wrong.”
“Oh Johnny you know your not aloud to kick a ball in side. Mum going to be so angry.”
“I’ll make it up to you I promise.” Johnny said.
“Oh and I set the new ice lime drink bottle on flame, sorry.”

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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousAugust 12, 2018 at 3:58 PM

    I really like the start boom bang thump you did really good with the speech marks

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