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Have your parents ever ran away to go to war and left you with your mean Uncle and
Aunt?
Well my parents did. When I was only 1 year old and now I’m 12, Yes that’s
right they have been gone for 12
years. They could be dead but I like to
think they're still alive.
I don’t even know their names.
"Harper there is a letter here for
you" yelled my Aunt and Uncle.
"Coming" I said. So I went
down stairs and the letter, it was from my parents.
As
I read the contents of the letter, I was aware of the smile on my face. It had said they
were coming back next month.
The next month…..
Knock knock!! went the door I opened it
and there were my parents...
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