“Why would I do that?” I told my teacher. Someone in my class told my teacher that I punched Ava in the face. “Someone told me that you were playing on the playground when all of a sudden you punched her in the face.”said Mr Phillips
“But we were playing a game.”
"What were you playing?”
"We were playing tag with some other kids and well, I was in and I was chasing her. I went to tag her but pushed her over by accident and into my hand.”
"We were playing tag with some other kids and well, I was in and I was chasing her. I went to tag her but pushed her over by accident and into my hand.”
“So yes I did but it was an accident and she knew that.”
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