¨This is a nice day for a hike right Amy¨¨ Ahh right dad¨ said Amy. ¨Wow look at that¨ said Amy
¨It's amazing¨ ¨Dad come look ¨ DAD! WHERE ARE YOU ¨ said amy Amy ! where are you¨said dad
¨Ahh! What do I do should I wait or should I find dad maybe he went in here through the door. Dad are you in here dad!!! Where are you ugh it's getting darker and smaller I hope this is worth to find my dad blaa! I got dirt in my mouth YUCK! AHH! A worm eww! Gross .Ah finally out off that door.
¨It's amazing¨ ¨Dad come look ¨ DAD! WHERE ARE YOU ¨ said amy Amy ! where are you¨said dad
¨Ahh! What do I do should I wait or should I find dad maybe he went in here through the door. Dad are you in here dad!!! Where are you ugh it's getting darker and smaller I hope this is worth to find my dad blaa! I got dirt in my mouth YUCK! AHH! A worm eww! Gross .Ah finally out off that door.
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