Wednesday, August 29, 2018
Special Prompt #6 - Lucian
My mum went upstairs to tell us that we were having a picnic so we had to pack up and go. I went up the stairs grabbed a pink blanket and my mum got the BBQ for the picnic. I felt nervous even though it was a break for my family. We found this river that had a lot of ducks and was quite warm so we stayed there for our picnic. My Dad cooked some sausages and got some bread and sauce so we made some sausages on bread. I loved it so we stayed there for a long time.
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