Fursville
Have you ever been to fursville, if so then you would have heard or had the magical water.
What, you've never heard of fursville? Well then you must at least have heard about their water?
What color is it you ask, well it is pink and it was cooked or conjured by their town founder, Jeff Fishkins. How do you get there you ask, well you go to the magic stairs of course then you climb them don't be nervous it's fine. When you get to the top you then cross the magic river and enter through the magic door.
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