Wednesday, August 8, 2018

Special Prompt #3 Leena

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I went to the job to see if I could work there and then the boss said yes you can so then I said when do I  start. He said tomorrow and I said ok, so then I did and then I looked at the clock and it was 12:30 lunch time so then I had some lunch.  
Then after that I went to go back to work and I stayed on the job and then he said are you ever going  to leave the job and I said no.   
He said ok then are you always going to stay on the job and I said yes.
Next day there was a fire and I said how did that do that and I, said I don't know then he said ok and then the tree was on flames.

1 comment:

  1. Hi leena I really liked the way you but your words in to the story.I think you could work on making more seace

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