Monday, August 27, 2018
Special Prompt #6 - Laine
One day my Mum and me were walking beside the river and then my mum fell in the river. It was so funny but then I was not sure of what I she would do. I was so nervous. I did not know what to do so I jumped in the river and got mum and carried her back to shore. We went back home and went up the stairs and then we went back to do some cooking. We cooked pink biscuits then Mum sat down and had some cookies and I got mum a ice pack.
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