It was from one of my very old friends that I haven't seen for a very long time I meet her in high school but that was a while back now. Then I put it on my table and then I went to go and put the dishes away and then when I had opened the letter my face was really nervous from who it was from and then I read it.
The next day
I was just in my kitchen making my sandwich and then after I made my sandwich I want to go outside and play and then I came back inside and Mum said what is that and I said just some of my sandwich.
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