Lime Flame.
It was a windy day. My teammates and I, were getting ready for the gymnastic competition the next day. I was so nervous and I could tell my team was too. I looked at the clock to see what the time was, oh good I have 10 minutes to practice. Then someone walked in. Good, my best friend Charlee Ice has arrived. Not much afterwards our couch walked into the hall ¨Morning Lime Flame,¨ said our couch Mrs Heart. ¨I expect that everyone regularly practiced for tomorrow.¨¨I did,¨ I said. Then everyone seemed to echo me.
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