As I read the contents of the letter, I was aware of the smile on my face...
I was reading the letter I stole from my sister's bag she was going to get in so much trouble when our parents got home.
¨Hey where did my letter that I made to trick Mum and Dad go??¨ asked my sister.
Oh no I had been wrong and on I was going to get in big big trouble for stealing.
Just then my parents walked in as if it was their cue and then my sister told on me.
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