Wednesday, August 8, 2018

Special Prompt #3 Issy D

“O danit I stepped in horse poo” yells Lola,
“Well that’s what happens when you don't muck out the stools regularly” replies mom,
“Honey I made a lime drink for you come get it I put ice in it” says Dad,
“Nk nk nk, Flame come here”
“Nnah”
“Flame why are you so dirty”
“Sorry sis I took her to the beach”
“Hanna why did you do that without asking me now I have to clean her and my bedtime is 9 o’clock and it’s already 8!!!
“Mum, Lola just yelled at me”, say’s Hanna.
“Ok we'll sort this out tomorrow”.

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 12, 2018 at 4:06 PM

    Very interesting Issy.D and sounds exactly like a farm

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  2. UnknownAugust 13, 2018 at 8:58 PM

    Issy, you have used an interesting and different approach. I could really relate to this situation, as I am sure many families could. Fiona-Team100WC

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