Wednesday, August 28, 2019
100WC - Aug 19 (9) - Biankha
As I walk in the kitchen my mum says "just because it is doesn't it should be" I think wait what as I turn around the corner I see my brother I assume something has happened but I just mind my own business which is quite hard but I try my hardest so I walked slowly to my bedroom trying to hear what they are saying I hear things like thats not fear and then mum say well that's just how the cookie crumbles .I think well I need to what's going on in there so I walk quietly and slowly and then I get there OH NO!! ...
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