The year was 3093
I am running away from THEM ‘now you might be asking who is THEM is well I don’t know who THEM is but all I know is that they are some sort of alien but as you know I have no idea what THEM are this is what happened that ended up with me Running’
“Master, THEM are back they are hiding at the gate but luckily we have infrared vision.” I said
“Good if we take them by... wait they know we have that they might be tricking us stand down” Master replied.
later that day
I was in a room then THEM where here I heard them before I saw them…
if you wan't to find out what happens next wait for part two
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