Thursday, August 8, 2019
Aug 19 (6) - 100WC - Biankha
I heard the roof creek and the wind blow past my window, then I heard ̈watch out there home ̈ so I ran to mum and dads room and told them but they weren't there ,so I peeked out the window and didn't see anyone but I heard them before I saw them. I went outside and then saw a shadow so I followed it and then I saw my parents but they looked like zombies it was pretty creepy and scary.
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