“Go clean your room” said my mum “but it is clean” I replied “Okay then, will you be Okay with me check it then? “..... no” I said, sheepishly “So it is messy?” she asked “Yes…” I replied “Well, just because it is doesn’t mean it should be messy so go clean it” She said “But mum can’t I do it tomorrow” I begged “That sounds familiar, oh that right you said it yesterday, and the say before that, AND the day before that!” she started to get angry “But mu-” she cut me off “No buts! Go clean your room” she said, now angry “Okay.. fine” I replied
Sunday, August 25, 2019
Genevieve - Aug 19 (9) - 100WC
“Go clean your room” said my mum “but it is clean” I replied “Okay then, will you be Okay with me check it then? “..... no” I said, sheepishly “So it is messy?” she asked “Yes…” I replied “Well, just because it is doesn’t mean it should be messy so go clean it” She said “But mum can’t I do it tomorrow” I begged “That sounds familiar, oh that right you said it yesterday, and the say before that, AND the day before that!” she started to get angry “But mu-” she cut me off “No buts! Go clean your room” she said, now angry “Okay.. fine” I replied
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