Suddenly I slipped and found myself lying with my belly on the ground and my face hanging over the edge as I turned my head, the world spun, I quickly heaved myself off the wet ground and walked away.After that I had realised that I was on the top of a building. How do I get off this I panicked.
Bang! I jumped up scared as the normal world came back to me, I was lying in my bed with my blankets pulled over my head. I sighed with relief, it was just a dream.
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