Wednesday, August 21, 2019

August 19 (8) - 100WC - Kate

“My favourite colour is turquoise,” announced Kayla, as she tugged  the shoulder of Sharanae’s tee-shirt. “Mine is pink, sharanae replied quietly.

“Shhh,” whisperers Acelia, tiny flecks of spit came rushing toward Kayla from Acelias mouth, “Ewww!” screamed Kayla, all eyes rushed her way.

“What is all this commotion,” questioned Mrs Horan.

“Nothing,”  Kayla replied silently.

 “Well then,” Hrs Horan said, “we will get back to the story.” “The cats were extremely adventurous,” Continued Mrs Horan, “that is why the cats decided to travel to a tropical island, they sailed for 14 days….”

 “This is so boring,” whispered Kaylah.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Kate
    What a fascinating 100WC you have written. I love how you have written the words into the challenge in such a way that the story just flows. Well done.

    Mrs P (Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand

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