Sunday, August 11, 2019

100 WC Abby Sommerhalder. The Long Fall.

I run up the stairs to the top of the skyscraper in Auckland and stand behind a crowded line. “Hey what's happening?” I say. The glass had been smashed all around the place. “A crane smashed into here so there is no wall or glass. The crowd walks away but I stay where I am. Suddenly Leo comes running into me and I fall off the edge. I just grab a pole and look down I am about 4 miles off the ground. As I turned my head the world spun and I let go. I start the long fall.


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