Wednesday, August 14, 2019

100WC week 4 - Kate



Waiting for the surface to slowly dissolve beneath my feet. Not wanting to look back to see the horrors of everything I once knew was gone. I was stuck, I didn't know what to do, should I just stand there and let the ground carry me into the depths of the world or should I run,  not knowing where I would end up. I was scared and lonely. As I turned my head, the world spun. Looking back was a bad idea, I could see nothing but darkness, everything seemed a blur but I know I wasn't safe here….

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