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̈Wheres my keys honey ̈ asked dad
¨I don't know where your keys are? ̈ mum
replied ̈maybe in the washing machine ̈ guessed mum.
̈What!" shouted dad̈because it might be in one of your pants ̈questioned mum. ¨It could not be in
my pants¨ yelled dad
̈just because it is doesn't
mean it should be in one of your pants¨ I ask, so he looked all of his
pants nothing there so he ran around the house still even he looked closely to
but still nothing but he remembers he left it in his car so he calls the people
that can fix cars and open doors when they are locked when they finished to get
the key out of his car it cost $102 dollars sorry I forgot to say he's a very
rich man he buys me everything I want. Like gaming PC, consoles, ipad, iphone,
gaming chair. Basically everything so he paid it we hop into our car and drive
home drive home. Any way we have two cars, one is a family car the car brand is
a Ford Ranger Raptor my dads work car is a Porsche 911 carrera.
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