“Just
because it is, doesn’t mean it should be,”
Kaylah protested, “just because someone says it's right doesn't mean that
everyone agrees with it!
”Okay
that's going great,” I say ,”but you need to pause for one second and then go
into that bit where you that everyone does not agree, but still great job I say
reasuring …..”
“Just
because it is, doesn’t mean it should be, just because someone says it's
right doesn't mean that everyone agrees with it,” she repeats.
“ Okay
going great,” I say, my eyes gaze off at the clock,” oh shoot! ” I say, “it's time
for you to go on stage.” “You got this girl,” I whisper as Kaylah walks on
stage.
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