Monday, August 5, 2019
Aug 19 (6) - 100WC - Olivia
I Slowly crept out of my room as I heard my parents trying to whisper. As I peeked an eye through the tiny cracks between the doors I heard “ should we tell her that she's adopted I heard them before I saw them that's just wrong!!! I ran to my room and locked the door ahhhh I'm adopted` hopefully they didn't hear the big scream that I let out I don't want them to know that I know OMG I just can't believe this I'm actually ADOPTED NOOO wait what it could be my sister or me ahhhhhhh
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