“just because it is doesn’t mean it should be” Well that's what my dad told me before he passed I didn't get what It meant until now.I was at school waiting for my named to be called for the roll and these girls were bullying this other girl and it made me so angry I just sat there and watched I was too scared to go up and say stop but I was afraid they will do it to me… After school they continued to bully that girl they were punching and kicking this time I went up and said STOP.
Sunday, August 25, 2019
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Dear Olivia
ReplyDeleteGreat details. I loved how you showed how she stood up for this girl.
Comment on my 100 Word Challenge
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hello Olivia,
ReplyDeletegreat introduction, i really liked the meaning behind this 100 word story. I wonder what inspired you to make this kind of mini story!
if you would please give advice or comment on my 100 word challenge
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