Monday, August 12, 2019

August 19 (7) - 100WC - Caitlyn


I was on this high building has high as a  crane waiting for my friend to arrive, little bob pep and little bob Kevin were striding along my slide.
 My friend has finally arrived, Why don't we look over the edge and have a glass of wine.
 So over we went holding hands and drinking a big glass of wine .
What a lovely view and  then….. he said goodbye, Down  I go off this big building falling down so fast, as I turned my head , the world spun nothing could be seen I was waiting to hit the ground when I suddenly  realised it was just a dream .


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2 comments:

  1. cameron phillipsAugust 13, 2019 at 4:06 PM

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  2. AnonymousAugust 13, 2019 at 4:11 PM

    Why were you going down the building fast?

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