There was
this creeping sound that I heard .
I heard
them before I saw them come out of the cupboard and there were lots of them,
lots of these little eyes and it was starting to slowly come out faster, and
faster it ran chasing me all around the house I thought I had lost it but no
,it was still chasing me .
I opened
the door and ran to the next door neighbours and hoped that it didn't know were
I was, it was so hard running away.
Wait it
has been a couple of minutes and it still is not here I will go back and see if
it is safe noooooo run .
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