I was walking into the forest one day waiting for something to happen something really scary I cared on my usual way until I realise someone was watching me It was really creepy I kept going until It was starting to really freak me out I ran real fast trying not to think about it but it was stuck in my head and I don’t think it is going to come out just because it is doesn’t mean it should be following me I got to my house all nice and safely yelling out my parents name no one was home I thought but then I heard this noise .
Monday, August 26, 2019
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Dear Caitlyn,
ReplyDeleteGreat Job. I love how you used vivid details. I also loved the cliff hanger. Are you going to follow up this story?
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hello Caitlyn,
ReplyDeletei really liked the ending of this story, it makes me want to read more of it!
Has anything inspired you to make this story from experience or a book?
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