gradually, things started to move. I didn't know what it was. Was it an earthquake? a meader? It kept getting louder and louder. It seemed to get closer and closer at that moment I thought the world was going to end or I was going to die!!! I was praying that I wouldn't die and that the world wouldn't end. Then I realised that my mum and dad were talking to a guy before. Did they want the guy to wreck our house? I ran outside and sed stop killing our house then i realized that the man was digging.
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