The metal floor beneath me had begun to rumble. I felt like I was in the middle of a crusher being pressed. I take a peek out of my bedroom window, and see that part of the space station has fallen off. I scan my surroundings, where do I go?, do I try to fix it?, the questions just kept coming and coming. I finally came to a conclusion, a dangerous creature possibly could have broken through the cell when the part of the space station had crumbled. I stumbled down into the escape pod, gradually, things started to move. Everything lifted off the ground. Then I saw it, a stone statue. I turned away from it, then I,turned away “SNAP” My neck had broken.
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