Sunday, September 20, 2020

100WC - Week #3 - Joe

 Hello? Hello?! The phone didn't work, I wonder why they didn't pick up. I knew they never should have said yes.  Then something happened. My phone rang this time. I answered it. Uh hello? I said, Hello… you are probably wondering why I'm calling you...Wait. DR BOT?! Yes… WHY DID YOU AGREE TO BE A SECRET AGENT?! How should I know? You are my problem… But why? Well you should have said goodbye early… Wait what? ¨Trap door opens¨ AHHH!! Bye bye old friend…. NOOO!!! BOOF! Ahh...My arm... wait where I am? Oh no! I've gotta get out of here.


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