Monday, September 14, 2020

100WC - Week #2 - Madison

I was just biking to the house with a crate full of pumpkins from the shed, when all of a sudden a giant hay bale just popped up out of nowhere!” I say into the phone that afternoon. I see, but are you sure that it wasn't there before?” replies my Mum. Yes!  It just popped up out of nowhere!” I say exasperated. Okay, well stay where you are, I’ll be home soon,” says my Mum. It’s not as if I can move anyway!” I reply. Why?Because I’m stuck in the hay bale!The line went dead. Come on!


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