My gamer had gone on a holiday, for a week. But, let me introduce myself, I’m Steve the minecraft default skin. A few days later my gamer had come back, when he got on. There was this notification that said the following. “Do you want to update?” He accepted the offer, but little did he know this update was bad. It had made the mobs evolve into Mutants! When it finished updating he got on, but there were no mobs around. “Where had they gone?” he wondered. In a single blink a Mutant zombie picked him up off the ground, and flung him into a mountain. They should have never said yes.
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I was in Sydney on my yearly visit. When the sun went down. I was trying to feel my way back to my apartment. When something pulled me bac...
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One day there was a spiky fruit up in the tree, there was two big spiky fruits. I wondered “What is in that spiky fruit? “Maybe there... -
Our first time writing for 100WC This weeks prompt words are... shouted crimson misty frantically grave ...
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