Thursday, September 10, 2020

100WC - Week 1 - Hannah

Alone In my room sitting on my bed. Gradually, things started to move. Am I in a dream? That's a thing I will never know. I thought 2020 wasn't going to get any worse But it just did. Everything was going dark,  I couldn't see my bed anymore. I felt like nothing, like a ghost. I looked around and I felt my heart drop. I saw something that looked like a human body. I took a closer look and it was me I looked cold and white like snow. It was not a dream I was gone all along. Just like a ghost.

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