Sunday, September 13, 2020

100WC - Week #2 - Joe

 


Today my dad told me I need to get outside and do something for people. I asked my dad why? He said that we need to get some money so get out there now! Fine… Hmm what should I do for people? AH! I got it. I can deliver pumpkins to people if my mom has pumpkins and farmer clothes. 5 minutes later. Ok now I'm ready, let's deliver some pumpkins! I got on my bike and rided it. Ok this is starting out pretty good I got some money from people. So I will….what-... ¨Wheel falls off “AHH CRASH! Ahh my head.


By -

1 comment:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 13, 2020 at 6:47 PM

    great job job that story was so call I liked how you use ahh my head

    by charlie

    ReplyDelete

I really liked . . . because . . .
I really liked the way you . . .
I enjoyed reading this because . . .
It was especially good when you . . . because . . .

I think you need to . . . because . . .
Next time you write . . .
Think about adding . . .
Have you thought about . . .
To improve your . . . try . . .
Perhaps you could . . .

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)
  • 100WC - Week #26 - Kate
    I was in Sydney on my yearly visit.  When the sun went down. I was trying to feel my way back to my apartment.  When something pulled me bac...
  • 100 WC Week #33 by Zak
    One day there was a  spiky fruit up in the tree, there was two big spiky fruits.  I wondered “What is in that spiky fruit? “Maybe there...
  • 100WC Week #29 - All of Room 4's Posts
    Our first time writing for 100WC This weeks prompt words are... shouted     crimson   misty frantically   grave ...