Sitting alone up in a tree looking at the cars driving by one by one. Suddenly a car slowed down by a group of girls who looked like they were having fun. I just thought it was someone they knew who was in the car. One of the taller girls started nodding but they never should have said yes, the driver hopped out of the car it turns out it was a man. One of the short girls who looked young started screaming with fear. The man grabbed the young girl now all of them started screaming with terror And that's why you don't trust strangers.
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