Today i was fighting lunar moon and he came down to the earth atmosphere and he fort and fort in tile he was losing so he brought the moon down to the ground and gradually, things started to move up and up and up into space the homes stay on the ground and we had a gigantic fight then i knocked him to the ground then he got back up and knocked me to the ground i got knocked out then i thought he will finish me off but when i looked up he went away for same resin sorry for all the damchin
-
I was in Sydney on my yearly visit. When the sun went down. I was trying to feel my way back to my apartment. When something pulled me bac...
-
One day there was a spiky fruit up in the tree, there was two big spiky fruits. I wondered “What is in that spiky fruit? “Maybe there... -
Our first time writing for 100WC This weeks prompt words are... shouted crimson misty frantically grave ...
No comments:
Post a Comment
I really liked . . . because . . .
I really liked the way you . . .
I enjoyed reading this because . . .
It was especially good when you . . . because . . .
I think you need to . . . because . . .
Next time you write . . .
Think about adding . . .
Have you thought about . . .
To improve your . . . try . . .
Perhaps you could . . .