They walked into the haunted house... but there was no one there.... They walked down the hallway… there was no one there… they walked into the kitchen…. They saw someone's shadow. “Would you like to look around?” The shadow came closer… “Um, uh.. ok?” They replied, so they followed the shadow. Down the hallway, past the kitchen, into the bedroom… The shadow opened the door. “HaHa! Got you now!” The shadow said. The shadow opened the door, into a cupboard...the cupboard had nails all over the wall…The 2 little kids screamed in pain…. They never should have said yes….
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