Today is the day. I am finally doing it. I have wanted for years and years. I am going to ask my parents to let me build a tree house. Here I go,
¨Mum, Dad can I build a tree house.¨ I say, making sure to sound extra excited.
¨Where will you do that¨ Mum replied.
¨ In a tree¨ I say as if it is the most obvious thing on earth.
¨There are none¨ Dad answers.
I look around. I guess it has been a long time since I went outside.
They never should have said yes to an Ipad...
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