“They never should have said yes,” I say to my brother.
“I agree! This place is so cold and dark and dingy!” my brother replies.
“Yeah, well, I guess we'll just have to get used to it,” I say, referring to the new house we have just moved into.
The place looked like it hadn't been lived in for years!
It was almost… haunted.
I walked up the creaky stairs to my room, when suddenly my door opened! By itself!
“Who’s there?” I ask nervously.
Suddenly a cold hand grabs my shoulder.
“Me!” it replies.
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