They never should have said yes. Because this was the cause for earth to be inhabitable. They had agreed to send 100 kids that were criminals back to earth, little did they know how bad it would go. They had been sent in the wrong direction. Now and again everyone would start attacking each other, just for not working hard. A few days had passed and everything had gone to hell. Everyday there was this fog, that would fully burn your skin in minutes. The people back up in space had been thinking about sending supplies. But they hadn’t known.
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