One day I was on my laptop scrolling down on facebook seeing if my friends had posted anything new yet. Then suddenly a photo of me with chicken pox. I didn’t remember putting it on, I didn't think I would put it on. I kept on scrolling through old posts when a new post popped up, and it was my friend “oh my god Amy you look so ugly¨sevrel other people like this comment and no one told them to back off. Maybe my life is ruined. Just then another post of me comes up, me without my braces. My life is definitely ruined.
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