When I was watching tv with my mum the tv was turned on but… i didn't remember putting it on… so i carried on but them mum said as I was trying to put a different program on ‘LEAVE THE REMOTE’ oh sorry I was wanting to watch my program oh ok then it better be a good program our how about we just watch a movie ‘ok then what movie the elf movie silly it is christmas haha ‘ ok mum said’ 1 hour later we finished the movie and i was asleep; waky waky mum said’ waking me up’.
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